雅思7阅读可以错几个？
雅思阅读错了8个，有没有大神帮我看一下分析有没有问题啊！ 还有听力大概对了15-16个，作文大作文主题图写的还行，小作文最后两句话没写好，求过7呀~~~ 小作文开头第一段我写了
1.The graph shows the percentage of females and males in high school completing homework daily from 2003 to 2013... 第2段写了中间的两点理由
2.However，the two reasons are not enough to explain everything completely. For example，it would be difficult to understand that why there is a slight increase in the male's percentage doing homework on weekdays while female's percentage dropped slightly... 第3段写了最后的两个原因以及解决方法
3.Therefore，to solve this problem，we can take some measures to encourage girls more and help them catch up with their peers，such as setting up special classes for all students who need extra tutoring and giving out more interesting learning materials so that everyone has fun when doing home work
大概这样的～这样写可以吗？需要怎样修改呢？谢谢各位啦~~